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Experimental Narritive: Armadaverse


Okay, no planning, no plotting, no figuring out the right characters to use when, no spellcheck (YIKES!) just me with an open reply window typing until I'm tired.
Should be an interesting experiment in "First Draft" writing. So, here we go, seat of the pants writing.

TRANSFORMERS #101
ASHES OF VICTORY


The Decepticon Command Ship Nemesis.

A vessel that strikes fear in the heart of every sentient who knows it's name. But today, fear presides not only without...but Within.

SHOCKWAVE: (tossing the empty battle helmet of Super-mode Energon Optimus Prime across the deckplates where it skids to a stop at Galvatron's feet)
"FOR THIS!? Your mad obsession with destroying Optimus Prime has cost us dearly this time Galvatron. The choice you made was devestatingly illogical! All of Cybertron was laid bare before us for the taking...and you squandered our tactical advantage for nothing more then the oppourtunity to kill Optimus Prime to satisfy your own ego."

GALVATRON: (Smirking, yet obviously losing patience with Shockwave) "Be mindful of your tone Shockwave. Your words border on mutiny, and I have little patience for one of your pitifly veiled challenges to my authority right now."

CYCLONUS: (aside to Demolishor who looks very uneasy) "Uh oh, looks like old one-eye may have downloaded more then he can process."

DEMOLISHOR: I've got a bad feeling about this

SHOCKWAVE: Calculation: Your elimination of Prime at the cost of taking Cybertron has set our overall strategy back seven hundred and sixty two trillion breems. The short term victory of eliminating the Autobot leader is inconsequential compared to the estimated value of Cybertron as a secured base of operations.

GALVATRON: (clearly annoyed and dismissive)...more of the same Shockwave...

SHOCKWAVE: "Conclusion... "(Raises cannon arm and points it squarley at Galvatron's chest) "You are a detriment to this army and must be purged." (Accelerator vanes snap open and the cannon's interrior begins to glow green)

GALVATRON: (clenching his fists in rage) "HOW DARE YOU AIM A WEAPON AT ME! I will have your fuel pump for an a...

(Galvatron is cut off as Shockwave's powerful blast streaks across the docking bay and lances straight into the Decepticon leader's chest, slightly left of center)

SHOCKWAVE: Theory Confirmed: When faced with authoritative threat you would pontificate to satisfy your uncontrolled ego rather then sieze the tactical initiative.
(Galvatron tries to raise his arm mounted tank cannon, but a pair of blasts from Shockwave's arm mounted blasters streaks out and lances the barrel into slag) Conclusion: I'm going to enjoy watching you die Galvatron.

CYCLONUS (background) Oh...slag...

Last edited by Deinonychus, 10/4/2005, 10:35 pm


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